.Sicky.
Happy Little Boozer
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Post by .Sicky. on Nov 20, 2006 12:46:44 GMT
**Warning Emo-rific writings here**
You're the personification of seduction The prime suspect in my destruction You penetrated my mind, body and soul Turning my insides as black as coal
No one touched me like you did No one f**ked me like you could No one wanted me like you claimed Everyone refused me, like I said
You made me what I am I believed that you gave a damn Tell me once again you love me Lie to me so I can break free
Your words they play on my mind And as I look the more I find And as I find the more I cry As I cry the more I die
My eyes are raw And my head is numb I've been waiting forever For you to be gone
And now everything is done and said I can lay in my coffin bed Sleep my life away My dreams are dark and here to stay
By Emma Brown
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Post by Mirage on Dec 3, 2006 8:07:47 GMT
Despite the most horrible emo like genre, i kinda liked it and felt sad for about 2 minutes and 30 seconds.
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.Sicky.
Happy Little Boozer
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Post by .Sicky. on Dec 3, 2006 20:03:08 GMT
Thank you! Twas a very angst time in my life. This guy totally f**ked me over, and so.. this poem. ;D
I adore the first two lines. Was soo proud of myself for that one. xD
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Post by Mirage on Dec 12, 2006 11:12:12 GMT
You should be proud, and yes the first two lines set the scene very well.
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