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Oct 15, 2007 15:53:02 GMT
Post by Mirage on Oct 15, 2007 15:53:02 GMT
I have mixed feelings of whether I hate this or like it. Critique from the people as always, are required.
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Absinthe
Stick it in your happy place.
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Oct 15, 2007 16:16:38 GMT
Post by Absinthe on Oct 15, 2007 16:16:38 GMT
The squares on his eye look weird and the blue looks funny, but other than that, it looks good.
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Oct 15, 2007 18:25:29 GMT
Post by Richard El Britannia on Oct 15, 2007 18:25:29 GMT
It be a bit dark, me thinks. Try to add something in there which gives a light source. That'll help with the focal point, which I'm moving onto next. The stock seems a bit far to the right. Bring it in a little more so there isn't as much empty space. Not too sure Vash's gun works very well in that colour, either. I like the idea, though. If you can try and work with that, it might look really good. The text is decent, but stands out a little too much. Try soft-light or something. Add some effects, too. Just plain white doesn't work to an advantage here. Hope it helps.
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Oct 15, 2007 19:26:31 GMT
Post by Mirage on Oct 15, 2007 19:26:31 GMT
Heh, sadly I never save sigs as to edit them again. This is the final version. Though I use the advice given to me by my critics to enchance my next sig. Thanks for your advice, the entire sig was an experiment, like all my sigs. I mean, have you seen the sig I'm using now? My god was the words that came to mind when I saw it after a week or so.
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