Post by Absinthe on Aug 1, 2008 1:39:19 GMT
This is NOT MINE. It belongs to someone who is not a member here. She wants opinions on it. She plans on finishing the story and making a whole book with it. So, once again, THIS IS NOT MINE AND I TAKE NO CREDIT FOR IT. I'm merely posting it to get your opinions (since I'm going to be co-writing it with her). She's asked me not to disclose her identity in any way.
It was late. Claire didn't know how late, but night had closed it's purple
curtain around her as she relaxed on a blanket on the grass of Oakland Park. She
was visiting her hometown of Thief River Falls, Minnesota after being away for
what seemed an eternity. Time had slipped away in the old familiar scent of cut
grass and leaves. There was a chill in the air and she could actually smell the
Autumn coming. It was only late August, but summer left that town like an old
friend. It always returned sooner or later, but it's stay was always too brief
and it's passing came much too soon. Claire had always loved the Autumn there.
She had been to the far ends of the earth and still her favorite place was
Oakland Park. Whenever the fall would come, she longed for it's quiet stillness
and the sounds of nature that would lull her into a bliss that she could never
find anywhere else.
There was something about that town that seemed to beckon her back. Things just
move at a slower pace. Everything seemed to be stuck in somewhat of a time warp
and whenever Claire returned, it was like she was 15 years old again. Everyone
thought of her the same way and everyone looked the same to her. She had moved
there in High School from Detroit when her mother sought a better life and
school for her children. The town was closer to family in Canada and Claire and
her sister and brother could spend their summers on their Grandparents farm. How
she loved that farm. She had so many friends there and she hated when it was
time to go back to "the states". Thief River Falls was not the place that Claire
ever wanted to be a part of. A rut she called it. The whole place was stuck in a
rut and couldn't move forward. There was the same old gossip and whispers about
her for as long as she could remember. There was a time when she loathed the
place and it's people. Now she longed for the old rut. It seemed there were
answers there that she was looking for and perhaps now she could finally figure
out exactly who they were and what they wanted with her. Why had they chosen to
make her the one that could see them? Who were they and was she just some kind
of amusement to them or was there another purpose in mind?
One of them in particular held a definite piece to the puzzle. He was never far
from Claire and no matter where she roamed, he was always there. She couldn't
always see him, but she felt his presence. In this cool evening air she was
somehow warmed and comforted by a being that had been there for her since the
first time she ran to that park to get away from some taunting classmates. She
had thought him as a guardian angel of sorts. She never believed in Angels and
wasn't a religious person, but somehow there was a feeling of good about him. He
was the voice that told her not to stoop to their level and to keep quiet. He
would drown out their cruel words and soon she would feel nothing. She would
just bite her tongue and not say a word and they learned to think of her as a
freak and soon left her alone. Better to be a freak than to be pigeonholed into
one of their groups. She'd tried that and found it not to her liking. Here she
was thinking she fit in only to find herself being the butt of their jokes or
enduring the constant questions as to why couldn't she just try and be normal.
She'd had enough and had chose her own path. There were only a couple of people
who would walk that path with her. One was her best friend Jen and the other was
the man that she did not know much about. He came to be known as _______ and as
for why he chose her path she did not know, but she was finally ready and most
eager to put the pieces together and figure it out.
It was late. Claire didn't know how late, but night had closed it's purple
curtain around her as she relaxed on a blanket on the grass of Oakland Park. She
was visiting her hometown of Thief River Falls, Minnesota after being away for
what seemed an eternity. Time had slipped away in the old familiar scent of cut
grass and leaves. There was a chill in the air and she could actually smell the
Autumn coming. It was only late August, but summer left that town like an old
friend. It always returned sooner or later, but it's stay was always too brief
and it's passing came much too soon. Claire had always loved the Autumn there.
She had been to the far ends of the earth and still her favorite place was
Oakland Park. Whenever the fall would come, she longed for it's quiet stillness
and the sounds of nature that would lull her into a bliss that she could never
find anywhere else.
There was something about that town that seemed to beckon her back. Things just
move at a slower pace. Everything seemed to be stuck in somewhat of a time warp
and whenever Claire returned, it was like she was 15 years old again. Everyone
thought of her the same way and everyone looked the same to her. She had moved
there in High School from Detroit when her mother sought a better life and
school for her children. The town was closer to family in Canada and Claire and
her sister and brother could spend their summers on their Grandparents farm. How
she loved that farm. She had so many friends there and she hated when it was
time to go back to "the states". Thief River Falls was not the place that Claire
ever wanted to be a part of. A rut she called it. The whole place was stuck in a
rut and couldn't move forward. There was the same old gossip and whispers about
her for as long as she could remember. There was a time when she loathed the
place and it's people. Now she longed for the old rut. It seemed there were
answers there that she was looking for and perhaps now she could finally figure
out exactly who they were and what they wanted with her. Why had they chosen to
make her the one that could see them? Who were they and was she just some kind
of amusement to them or was there another purpose in mind?
One of them in particular held a definite piece to the puzzle. He was never far
from Claire and no matter where she roamed, he was always there. She couldn't
always see him, but she felt his presence. In this cool evening air she was
somehow warmed and comforted by a being that had been there for her since the
first time she ran to that park to get away from some taunting classmates. She
had thought him as a guardian angel of sorts. She never believed in Angels and
wasn't a religious person, but somehow there was a feeling of good about him. He
was the voice that told her not to stoop to their level and to keep quiet. He
would drown out their cruel words and soon she would feel nothing. She would
just bite her tongue and not say a word and they learned to think of her as a
freak and soon left her alone. Better to be a freak than to be pigeonholed into
one of their groups. She'd tried that and found it not to her liking. Here she
was thinking she fit in only to find herself being the butt of their jokes or
enduring the constant questions as to why couldn't she just try and be normal.
She'd had enough and had chose her own path. There were only a couple of people
who would walk that path with her. One was her best friend Jen and the other was
the man that she did not know much about. He came to be known as _______ and as
for why he chose her path she did not know, but she was finally ready and most
eager to put the pieces together and figure it out.