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Post by Haylo on Aug 31, 2008 12:55:09 GMT
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Post by Richard El Britannia on Aug 31, 2008 15:52:52 GMT
I'll comment on all of them as a collective, really, considering they're all quite similar in composition. For a start, I absolutely love the contrast and lighting in the images. You've got them so, so right. Especially the second; everything is so dark and dull, then right in the middle of it all you have that massive vibrant display and it looks awesome. Having Kamaru stand there too really helps with the whole contrast thing as well. ^^ Gotta say, you're getting really, really good with the whole photography thing. My favourite is the second one too. Looks freaking amazing.  EDIT: I'm curious too. Where did you take the pictures? |
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Post by Crypto on Aug 31, 2008 17:16:55 GMT
Does it matter.
Can i have that guys number.
He's propper sexy like.
Nice ass too.
And yeah they are great.
[Edit, Thats not constructive]
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Post by Surreptitious Cardboard Box on Aug 31, 2008 22:15:38 GMT
Wow, that contrast is impressive. I would agree that the second seems most effective. The darkness around the edges seems to encompass the image, rather than cut it off. I like the angle from which the first and second are taken from, and the composition of the third, but something about the third one doesn't seem right. I think it's the colouring; obviously you can't help what colour the graffiti is, but I think if it were all red tones, rather than green and blue and yellow, it would seem more harmonious. The second one has this really amazing feel to it, though. It's hard to explain, but it's like when you watch a weird film and there's some sort of dream sequence, and different dream images spin around and flash up out of the dark, and it looks like that has happened with the second image. If the blackness took up my entire screen and that image was placed where it opens up in my FF tab it would look like a visual form of somebody's dream had spun up onto my screen. I also agree that having Karmaru present in the photos helps. The images would look bare if somebody wasn't in them, and he gives them that 3D edge. The only thing is, i think the image of him in the second photo isn't as effective as it is in the other two. The stance is fine, but the shadows around his face are a bit odd in the midst of all that colour. But I wouldn't worry about it too much. It does add to the contrast, as Richard said. But Karmaru, Richard's right; Hayley asked for constructive criticism . |
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Post by Crypto on Sept 1, 2008 17:58:40 GMT
BTW, I put that edit in. =D
And.
Im quite liking my shirt in the third one.
And Richado-Kun.
Its near ladybay retail park.
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Post by Haylo on Sept 2, 2008 14:55:20 GMT
Thank you. Thats helped loads, i might go back and try the third image in red's and more firey colours. It will also show that i've took other ideas and tried different suggestions.  I like the second one the best two, the angle and the rainbow of colours makes it eye catching i think and i hope my photography teacher thinks the same. I'm going to try another idea tonight, so if you wouldn't mind checking back to see when the next idea is uploaded and commenting on the next set, i'd appriciate it very much. Thanks again |
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Post by Haylo on Sept 7, 2008 20:53:42 GMT
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